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A Lost Friend

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Feb 2003 · 11 comments

It wasn't her decision you drove her away. She wanted to stay. But you might as well have crushed her heart. Now all you have is a lost friend. She isn't coming back no matter what you do. Because all you have is .. a lost friend. You betrayed her. Now she knows how you really feel. She doesn't need you anymore. She has a new life and new wonders and new dreams to live. And all you have is..... a lost friend.

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[10] CrAzYlAdY Surukain 24-Feb-03/9:42 AM Reply

I luved this poem when u first showed me it.

[1] Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/12:28 PM Reply

YAWN. bo-ring. theraputing wring is a nice thing to do, but too often folks think it is good for sharing. keep these to yourself. write about something new.

[1] Robert K Foster › Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/12:31 PM Reply

I meant "theraputic writing".

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/12:35 PM Reply

Don't you mean you meant "therapeutic writing"?

[1] Robert K Foster › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Feb-03/2:30 PM Reply

Sorry I don't type so well since my accident. I'm still getting used to using one elbow and one foot on the modified keyboard. The Doctors think I am coming along nicely.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/4:10 PM Reply

Please accept my sincerest condolences!!!!!!11

Is the awful quality of "less than a sentence 2" and "less than a sentence 3" compared to the genius "less than a sentence" due to your mishap?

[1] Robert K Foster › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25-Feb-03/7:19 AM Reply

as much as I'd like to blame them on brain injury, they were more of an attempt to repeat the glory of the first. The 2nd and 3rd "less than a sentence" were extremely difficult to settle on, whereas the 1st was a moment of purity. I felt like an 80's one hit wonder band trying to recapture the glory with the other two. my apologies. Also, I apologize for lying about having an accident. It was a bullshit excuse for bad typing skills.

[3] Nanshe › Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/4:24 PM Reply

I think it's the scotch ON THE ROCKS more so than being a capper, MISTER FOSTER.

[1] Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/2:38 PM Reply

Don't be discouraged. Keep trying. We are all trying.

[2] <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/4:35 PM Reply

I have a room and two day ski pass at bear mountain. We are expecting a foot in a half of snowsky. This poem is nucking futs & a pyle of shite. i like pregnant chick boobies , in my mouthsky.

[3] Nanshe › <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/4:43 PM Reply

Have you a pregnant chickie with yoooooooooooou? Great fun, getting there, eh?
I thought you were going boarding???