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Free verse № 4433

Escape

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

Drifting waves where the unicorn plays, The searching out of time. Where elves dance in a moonlight trance Wandering through my mind. Peace brings all these things, As I slowly sink into my dreams, Letting reailty die away Until another day.

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[n/a] <~> 20-Aug-02/7:56 AM Reply
sweet dreams, saccharin boy. my dreams tend to be a little more, shall we say, carnal...and that always paints a smile on my slumbering visage
[6] Amelia 20-Aug-02/3:43 PM Reply
This is nice, and speaks of contentment, I like it.