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Deceitful World

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jul 2002 · 0 comments

What is wrong with everyone? They're all just not the same From the truth they seem to run And play their two-faced game Their smile is fake and out of fun Their acts are dull and lame They do this as if it should be done As if it's their first aim I looked for a reason, but I found none Not even facts that I could frame To my life they arrived one by one On their fanciful friendship plane I cannot stand this, I can't move on I really wish they'd never came

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