Who am I?

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Mar 2003 · Edited 22 Mar 2003 · 7 comments

Identity versus confusion Real life versus illusion Is this what I've been longing for? Its been so long I can't remember Who am I? Who am I? Where do I stand? Am I a mouse or am I a man? What is my Ambition? While I was searching for direction I came upon my own reflection There is no future when you have no past No hope thats ever gonna last If I have any depth its because I'm hallow Lost with no clue what path to follow Asking who am I over and over again Searching for my motivation

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Mar-03/9:46 AM Reply

Apparently you think the aim of poetry is to take an idea on which you have only the vaguest of grasps, write down the first things that come to your mind when you think about the idea, and then try to confuse the reader with obtuse, meaningless sentences that at first glance look like ones that actually have meanings, so their grasp is made even worse than yours.

Well you're right! That is the aim of poetry.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Mar-03/12:14 PM Reply

So glad you aprove D.A. :)

[3] daniella 21-Mar-03/8:29 PM Reply

you is a pink bunny of doom. hop higher, make a sound.

[0] lunar 23-Mar-03/3:30 AM Reply

Does anyone ever understand anything Daniella says? on the fourth line from the end do you mean hallow or shallow? Its often best not to wonder who-am-i because the answer always seems to be i-am-nothing!

[n/a] <~> › lunar 23-Mar-03/9:16 AM Reply

yes. people do understand what daniella says. because she makes sense. invest a half second of thought, and you might understand, too.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › lunar 24-Mar-03/2:46 PM Reply

I ment hallow. Only by asking yourself who you are, can ask yourself who you want to be.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jun-03/9:35 PM Reply

Actually in retrospective I did mean hollow. Meaningless bull shit on trying to find myself, more about exploring being an artist and all that fun goo rather than any life message statement.