poemranker ::flaxen you by daniella

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Free verse № 44978

flaxen you

by daniella

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Mar 2003 · Edited 21 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

so intricate like him with an ordered chaos of pristine passion. the tumult underscores his eyes and circles round his kiss. it comes soft and fierce in its mount. linen, rough and tempting. should, i would wear only him next to my skin? till he furrows down beneath me conquering my inner core and all its rounded corners.

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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-03/9:46 PM Reply
No ryhme what so ever but good none the less. -7-
[n/a] daniella › thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Jul-03/9:26 PM Reply
free verse don't cost a thing...