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Heil Pope

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Mar 2003 · Edited 2 Jun 2006 · 1 comment

Hitler youths chants Heil Red and black on blue and blonde A young Pope salutes.

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[7] Ranger 2-Jun-06/11:23 AM Reply
I get the point of this, but I feel it would be stronger if it was less direct. 'Heil Father' would make for a catchier title, and 'heil' is an awkward word to use in a haiku because the way it's pronounced is borderline 1-2 syllables ('hai-yull').