poemranker ::A Little Too Long by calilegzzz

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Free verse № 45765

A Little Too Long

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

How can I tell you When you never seem to understand You dont like who I'm not You don't like who I am All I ever wanted was for you too love me Accept who I am Forget what I can't be I tried to grow up I tried to be strong Seems I've been trying A little too long I tell you I need you You say you don't care My love is dying Your love ain't there How can I tell you The pain you can give Leaving me crying With no will to live So I hide my feelings Right or wrong Seems I've been hideing A little too long

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[10] kthulah 31-Mar-03/8:29 PM Reply
I like it :)
[1] maffy 1-Apr-03/4:14 AM Reply
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