poemranker ::Acquaintance by NeeMan

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Free verse № 4596

Acquaintance

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

Weaving minds lead to gleaming souls intact from questioning our freedom or the relative irrelevance of our time space paradigms; mind space holograms. Illusions faded crisply into new realms to explore with you who makes me humble in my way of listening to what the cosmos has to say; soul-soft clay. eclectic. Sharing thoughts protect open minds from believing in worldly things and indoctrination of the masses full of lies; within glass tubes. Falseness disappearing through your happiness that shines on me and takes us to the next level where we should be so much more careful; more playful. electric.

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[8] horus8 15-Jul-02/12:26 AM Reply
I'm diggin your no-menclature. I'm gonna go read your other two and see what they doo
[7] Shardik 10-Oct-03/5:49 PM Reply
Seriously not bad.