poemranker ::Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul

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Free verse № 47260

Staying Sane

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Apr 2003 · Edited 23 Apr 2003 · 5 comments

Am I ok? Do I look alright to you? Should I be like this, because everyone is not I talk to the ones that answer me back and unfortunetly that's just too few Will I be ok? Cause this doesnt look too good for me Why must I conform to all this shit. Things dont have to go anything like this. Talking to myself is better anyway, cause I never have anything smart to say Everything should be like this, but people say I'm just insane Well fuck that then I guess I'll be the only fuckin whacko with a smile.

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[8] d35 16-Apr-03/9:45 AM Reply
nice as always
[10] Shardik 16-Apr-03/4:37 PM Reply
And a ten, a "smil" and a ten. Make that eleven. ele'en is one more then ten.
[n/a] e1ementfire 24-Apr-03/1:42 AM Reply
Insanity is abandoning the same place the sane man is standing. This diagnosis is handing a prior notion demanding we all have an equal understanding. This is why we see people landing all over the spectrum of sane to insane, and it's no true reflection cause a brain is a brain. But somehow that's no exception. we're expected to reach perfection
[3] bondjedi 24-Apr-03/5:29 AM Reply
vulgar and lazy.
[5] Caducus 24-Apr-03/9:31 AM Reply
Are you plasticgirlwithgun? Where is plasticgirlwithgun I miss that posh forked tongue.

This makes you sound a bit pathetic, insanity is recommended for anyone on ranker, see you in the canteen with angelina and winona and we'll smoke a bleeding fist over processed tuna and big momma.