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The Bored Housewife

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Apr 2003 · Edited 29 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

Going through the motions every Friday, Seduction is a futile attempt, I can transform his face into the one that got away, I can scream at the required pitch of satisfaction, Then smile at him to cosset his ego, Men are carnivorous voyeurs when it comes to reaction. He will sleep in the cot of my bosom now, And will moan if I move him away, I lay awake thinking yesterday’s thoughts, Knowing consequences are more frightening with age. Men live with habitual predictability, Inherited by lazy Fathers and Old wives tales, He will set the table as his mother did, A conserve of rasberry jam and silver condiments, Meticulous in presentation but never used, Its to show the guests we are the American dream. But most things are not how they seem. If your afraid of loneliness don’t marry, I laughed at that saying as a teen. So I know I will leave him when the children grow up, Bittersweet situation watching them grow, but waiting, So I will throw away my watch and live by routine, And pay my allegiance to the American dream, Be the cleaner, the cook, the wife, And the arm ornament who scrubs up okay, This is my life everyday. ============================ (posted for a mucker of mine) =============================

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[9] INTRANSIT 29-Apr-03/6:47 AM Reply
Yes, she's bored. But she's not ready to do anything about it. She needs a dash of frustration methinks.
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 29-Apr-03/8:40 AM Reply
oh she needs more than that. it's a lot less lonely, being alone. primary source knowledge, my friend.

as someone who wouldn't buy that, i say: she's as much to blame as he is. cad, you didn't judge, but it's there.
[8] richa 29-Apr-03/10:27 AM Reply
I don't want to take sides here, But it read well very fluent