poemranker ::I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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I must be out of my mind

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 May 2003 · Edited 22 Jun 2004 · 6 comments

Lately I have found That when I’m down You kick me in balls If I’m high you drag me to the ground Beat me till my face stops making that cracking sound Then drag my corpse through the halls Its moments like these Tied to a flag pole with my pants at my knees That I wish I were gay Cause then I wouldn’t end up swaying in the breeze Screaming could you help me down please All because your lips hold me in your sway I wouldn’t be locked in my locker Cause you heard me say that yeah I’d fuck her It wouldn’t have been so bad if it wasn’t after the dance My friends say that I ought to end it and I concur But its hard when I can’t even talk with her Its either pain or pleasure, slap or take off your pants Its all because of that damn sex appeal Can’t seem to say it, yea... whats the deal? I know its wrong but what can I say I can’t resist the way her body feels So what? The burns and scars will heal I still bet I’m getting more than you anyday

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6 comments

[1] lunar 10-May-03/5:55 AM Reply
Haha yeah
[n/a] richa 10-May-03/10:05 AM Reply
this is ok
gently amusing without recourse to the usual 'funny' issues written about on here
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › richa 22-Jun-04/11:20 AM Reply
One thing I really like about you richa is your great sense of humour. Keep it up! -10-
[n/a] richa › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Jun-04/11:34 AM Reply
ace, you have had over a year to think up that reply. -m10m-
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › richa 22-Jun-04/11:42 AM Reply
Do you mean to suggest I'm some sort of idiot?
[6] Felzpoet 24-May-03/4:57 PM Reply
Sweeet