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Free verse № 49706

Dr. Dr.

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 May 2003 · 4 comments

1-800 suicide, oh, I want to be at your side. Your smell is intoxicating, now I sit anticipating... Trust me now, do you dare, come with me, without a care. Violence and fear humiliate, I just want to retaliate. Pounding out agressions, sadism has become my dark obsession. Driving my knife in your flesh, down inside, my feelings mesh. Blood pours down your skin, I know that I will win. Scream in pain, I'll take your life, I own you now, me and my knife.

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[n/a] Bachus 21-May-03/6:20 AM Reply
Turkey.
[8] Robert K Foster 21-May-03/10:39 AM Reply
darwinism. suicide is so close to murder, they are like kentucky cousins. I recommend against eaither.
[1] INTRANSIT 21-May-03/3:42 PM Reply
udder.
[n/a] QUENDO 29-May-03/2:49 AM Reply
Bladder