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Free verse № 50265

The black scary night

by jauser

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 May 2003 · 3 comments

Night is a black hole dark and unexplored the night is scary and cold you won't know what's on the other side of the door The night is a good time for the bad to come out they will hurt you for as much... ... as a dime You will try fighting back and even shout but you still can't get out so the next time when you go out, think about what will happen in the night remember about your will be harm life AND BRING A DAMN KNIFE

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3 comments

[4] Felzpoet 25-May-03/5:55 PM Reply
Did u get jumped or somthin recently?
[n/a] jauser › Felzpoet 27-May-03/3:45 PM Reply
haha, no
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-May-03/6:19 AM Reply
I was disappointed that the scariest thing you could think of was a mugger. Oh, a mugger, that's going to keep me up at night shitting my keks.