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Free verse № 50596

At the end of the Day

by -vz18-

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 May 2003 · 10 comments

At the end of the day you’ll still be in my heart At the end of the day we’ll still be apart At the end of the day my heart will be gone At the end of the day you’ll still go on At the end of the day I’ll be your past At the end of the day I won’t be your last At the end of the day I’ll say good bye At the end of the day I’ll try not to cry At the end of the day you’ll realize who you dissed At the end of the day you’ll realize who your going to miss

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10 comments

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-May-03/11:01 AM Reply
The word dissed was once, dismissed, try it.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-May-03/1:20 PM Reply
No it wasn't.
[0] Bachus › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-May-03/3:45 PM Reply
Yes, it was.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Bachus 28-May-03/3:57 PM Reply
I think you'll find it is a contraction of "disrespected".
[0] Shardik › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-May-03/4:02 PM Reply
Oh, you meant, really. Well, of course James don't be a petty officer third class it's boring.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Shardik 28-May-03/4:05 PM Reply
Did you think the phrase "dis[s] and dismiss" meant "dismiss and dismiss"?
[0] Shardik › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-May-03/4:23 PM Reply
No, did someone you know?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Shardik 30-May-03/9:54 AM Reply
Are you going to admit you were wrong or not? An Gentleman would.
[n/a] QUENDO 29-May-03/2:51 AM Reply
At the end of the day it gets dark
[8] galaxy4unknown 4-Apr-04/9:32 PM Reply
IT IS A VERY NICE POEM.