poemranker ::Life begins when you graduate H.S. by INTRANSIT

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Haiku № 51375

Life begins when you graduate H.S.

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Jun 2003 · 2 comments

You have been bested, and in your mind it festers. Testing your mettle.

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[7] richa 3-Jun-03/1:19 PM Reply
I like rap wordplay but it sometimes seems a bit freestyle and craftless

A haiku however is a good compromise
[10] loneshadow29 4-Jun-03/1:20 PM Reply
good read... nuff said