Holiday In Hell

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jun 2003 · Edited 9 Jun 2003 · 7 comments

invisible Ammunitions premature Hallucinations Decapitated Roadsigns a desperate Sigh! Upfront the Bravesoul a Certified Asshole Now Date the Capital cession my home to the Cannibal Pisstalk, Chainsmoking campaigne Slice the deal, work a chameleon re-write the tremendous Chaos Disperse the hate generous Man Stands fearless A gentleman remorseless So who raped you Sire? they stepped in your shrine Address the man of God! suppress the Supremacy Play man for his Class the Rich Suppository up his ass wake up to Relief must you decieve? The devil bets your soul to the common Void should have heard her when she cried~ this is your holiday in hell so breakout of your shell dont marry my kind swim my brain juice and you'll find when there is no one left to thrill Its high time to kill!

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[7] RealmOfSong 9-Jun-03/9:12 PM Reply

I figured I'd tell you again that I really like this poem. I think the fact that it is busy gives it some power and sets a really good mood. To me, it seems like "This is your holiday in hell" sounds like it is ending. But that's just the way that I am thinking right now.

[n/a] systemofadown › RealmOfSong 9-Jun-03/9:14 PM Reply

thx man, I'll hold peace with watever u interpret out of this abstract, its for your eyes and mind, let them feed off it, peace out

[n/a] horus8 › systemofadown 10-Jun-03/12:50 PM Reply

I interpret a homerun of shit! Good, very good, very very good. They way you rhymed ass with class and thrill with kill... Stunning, and inventive, and a swim in brain juice? Wow, that's deep.

[6] Shardik 10-Jun-03/12:38 AM Reply

My one comment would be... Well, it's just too ballerina. I went out and even purchased a bunny to pet, and watch me dance a pink tutu. I guess I was expecting the real Shavo, and not his little sister, excuse me while a jete.

[6] Shardik 10-Jun-03/12:39 AM Reply

Oh, and peace out home skillet, word.

[n/a] systemofadown › Shardik 10-Jun-03/12:05 PM Reply

I feel stupefied by the uncertainity of your remarkable pee-sized jibe! but thats just me.

[n/a] systemofadown › systemofadown 10-Jun-03/12:07 PM Reply

piss out