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Dreary Mindsets

by Christina

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Jun 2003 · 1 comment

The dreary mindsets the crawling skin deliverance set in desolation, isolation. Just one thing I request to put escapism to the test deliverance in a pipe oblivion through a box Lets burn the thoughts alas, avoid untimely dues But now where else may I know I just want to escape this show.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 2-Jun-03/3:38 AM Reply
Great poeme! You eloquently express the mind-numbing boredom of a David "the new Houdini" Blaine show. How ironic that while he's absorbed in his self-important stunts, his audience also just wants to escape: to any place that doesn't include David Blaine.