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Dream Girl

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

She didn't know what to say. When he said that he thought of her everyday. She doesn't get how he could like me, A girl that does things so absentmindedly. A girl that you think, is just so pretty. She thinks it's only occasinally. A girl that you say is oh so funny, made you laugh so hard you had to pee. A girl that's room looks more like a pig pen, and that's always out playin with little children. A girl that like to act dumb, that thinks she no more amazing that someones thumb. He said well only if the thumb were on fire. She's so exciting she's like your main desire. And even though she think she treats him bad, to him it's like talkin dirty, that wouldn't make him mad. So, by now he's told the girl, that she means more to him than anything in the world. She blushes and she says to him, I love you and I hope you love me too.

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3 comments

[n/a] horus8 11-Jun-03/12:02 PM Reply
Naughty.
[n/a] LosT SykoPath › horus8 11-Jun-03/5:43 PM Reply
how is that naughty?
[5] Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/3:54 PM Reply
Rather weak and stolid.