Still waiting

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Jun 2003 · 2 comments

Still waiting for you to come my way But drifting farther, farther away Im waiting to see what the future will bring Will I sing like the birds in the trees Or sing like the wind over the seas This is confusing as confusing can be Waiting for you to come after me Just waiting here by myself Staring into space not believing what I see Why was it me? Still drifting farther, farther way Now I will turn and leave today Not waiting anymore Iâll find someone new Not waiting for you to tell me the truth *Ok this poem really sucks but I wrote it about my ex so Judge it all you want!*

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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Jun-03/12:10 PM Reply

http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=51209

Here is your solution.

[7] deleted user 19-Sep-03/2:32 PM Reply

NO, Dear. the last line is good. put the first and last lines together...

"Still waiting for you to come my way,
Not waiting for you to tell me the truth."