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I Wonder

by EmicaX

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Jun 2003 · 17 comments

Sometimes I wonder, If it will ever end. I can't stand 2 look at you, Though we said we'd be friends. I know that if I look, Into your bright blue eyes; I will be put in a trance, And be hypnotized. Though we had our differences, And our similarities. Now I know I made a mistake, You were meant for me. I know I shouldn't have let you go, Because you truly cared. You didn't come into my heart, To say you had been there. I can't take it any more, Though I know that I'll get by. I guess that I just wanted to say, I love you, and Good-Bye.

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[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/5:41 PM Reply
A good first poem for the Ranker C. but be fair warned that if they are all like this You are gonna get Flamed big time. Later Daze C. Later Daze. -8-
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/9:44 AM Reply
Sorry this clutter on your poem C. Being friends with me is like wearing a Target T-shirt, apparently.
[0] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/3:54 AM Reply
THIS IS A HUGE PILE OF STEAMING SHIT. NEXT!
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/6:00 AM Reply
You think you could be a little harder on a newb? If your going to be as harsh as D.A. then sign in as him for the love of Jesu!
[0] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/6:52 AM Reply
FUCK OFF YOU CUNT

HA HA
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/6:55 AM Reply
Ah... How sweet darlin' you used more potty language, your such a naughty little boy but its okay sugar. Jesu still loves you.
[n/a] deleted user › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/7:10 AM Reply
Your just a slack-assed -=Dark_Angel=- wannabe.

Shit, a while back you though "Jesu" was a misspelling.

Make up your own jokes, you dumb-ass copy-cat motherfucker.
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › deleted user 1-Jul-03/7:48 AM Reply
Oh HOW right YOU are. D.A. was the first person ever to use Jesu and the first person ever to say "Jesu loves you mockingly". EH! Wrong. Look in Canterbury Tales by Geoff Chaucer. In the description of the Pardoner is one exsample. Jesu isn't new. Now lets see how old is Chaucer? Well seeing as to how he died before Shakespeare was even concieved I'd say older than D.A.

Now then your absolutly right, I did think it was a miss spelling but D.A., Horus8, and Razorgrin, have given me quite an education since I first arrived.

I've said time and time again that I like D.A.'s writings, but I loathe Him. D.A. is not someone I WANNA BE. A sarcastic remark as general as that warrenting all this. Hmm... Go figure.
[4] Bachus › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/2:18 PM Reply
Of course it's not new you Idiots... It's fucking Italian, good God every fucking moron knows that. watching the two of you try to come off as being intelligent is comparable to watching Spinach grow on the moon.
[10] Luzr › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/6:56 AM Reply
"Any fool can criticize, condemn, and complain - and most fools do."
-Dale Carnegie
[n/a] deleted user › Luzr 1-Jul-03/7:13 AM Reply
Quotation is an inadequate substitute for independent thought

Anyway, Dale Carnegie was a fool-ass bitch who didn't know shit but how to bitch-slap a trick like a pimpin' mack daddy
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › deleted user 1-Jul-03/7:49 AM Reply
You just proved his point for quoting him.
[4] Bachus › Luzr 1-Jul-03/2:14 PM Reply
"People with dimples are inferior due to recessive genes, and should be turned into garden hoses" Adolph Hitler.
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › Bachus 1-Jul-03/8:15 PM Reply
Well they work for Slim Shady.
[10] Luzr › Bachus 1-Jul-03/8:30 PM Reply
true enough. its a good thing I've only got one. otherwise when the sleeping fury wakes up you'd be sucking golf balls thru me.
[8] JoyLuck 1-Jul-03/11:00 AM Reply
keep on truckin
[4] Bachus 1-Jul-03/2:19 PM Reply
Take a fucking picture.