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Free verse № 55082

Death on my arm

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jul 2003 · 6 comments

Frail Dime wings carrying carcass. Must have ricocheted off my mirror.

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6 comments

[8] Bill Z Bub 4-Jul-03/7:03 PM Reply
nice minimalist piece ** I've been away far too long ** and anarchy has descended on rancid mustard wings **
also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **

[n/a] INTRANSIT › Bill Z Bub 8-Jul-03/12:24 PM Reply
Yaaa DUDE! Go man go!
[n/a] <~> 5-Jul-03/6:37 PM Reply
hey rich. i'm back. and safe.

and you are more minimslist than when i left...
[9] horus8 5-Jul-03/7:11 PM Reply
Yes!
[7] god'swife 27-Jul-03/11:27 AM Reply
Nice
[3] Stephen Robins 19-Apr-04/6:49 AM Reply
rubbish.