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Ocular Photoalbum (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
Tear filled eyes stare silently, in pain, at a faded photo: Memory spills a river of ashes. The last remainder of the man. He once lived to stand still and smile... No smile existed when the eyes snapped the image of a frail shriveled corpse they once called Papa.. -

Up the ladder: In (ghazal)
Down the ladder: The Girl Who Is Gone

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4271
Posted: July 6, 2003 4:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2003 5:20 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Jul-03/5:58 PM | Reply
Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.51 > horus8 | 7-Jul-03/4:23 PM | Reply
Heh. dont poke on those particular emotions of mine. ;P
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 6-Jul-03/8:36 PM | Reply
I like the way you gently tap on the emotional heart string here. Very nice poem. -8-
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.51 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 7-Jul-03/4:24 PM | Reply
Yeah, so you now see i can play the emotion guitar. ;P
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.28.126 | 7-Jul-03/6:35 PM | Reply
nice poem
it treads nicely
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.172.28 > JoyLuck | 7-Jul-03/11:24 PM | Reply
thanks
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