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Death Wish

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

(okay i'll try and suck as bad as possible, here goes) I get out the pills and lay them in a row, No one would care if I chose to go, She left me for a guy older than me, Now I have found how cold love can be. So when I write out my suicide note, It will be with the blood on your hands, I throw the pills down my heavy throat, Fuck Life nobody understands. Where are my friends when i need them? They warned me about her but i never believed them, and when i told you what they said, you replied who you gonna believe them instead? well i should have you bitch, you left me for dead, 'I'm just not ready' Thats what you said, But you still took the ring, said you'd be mine, Now leave me to die.

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[n/a] richa 19-Jul-03/6:10 AM Reply
a little bit distant for a suicide poem, also you probably shouldn't rhyme so loudly on such a serious issue
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 19-Jul-03/2:59 PM Reply
Wow.. You do suck. I mean even at sucking. This is merely Mediocore. Not good, not bad. Just there.