poemranker ::four walls by crwncka1

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Free verse № 60288

four walls

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

though these walls of mine, right here where I stay, I now see the clues, that will show the way, for my sweet love, to return home to me, looking straight ahead, I see only my shadow, casting dark on the wall, peering left now, my shadow disappears, allowing me to see the map, my baby needs, to find her way home, now turning around, my shadow casts a refection, for just a quick moment, I see where my love is at, now looking right, I finally see, my baby right in front of me

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[5] horus8 11-Aug-03/6:57 PM Reply
Your baby needs to bite off your fat bitch nipple. Pear assed hacks.
[7] cyan9 19-Jan-06/1:34 AM Reply
Reminds me of the film Labyrinth at the end with the staircases