poemranker ::(getting used to spending too much time with myself) by Patsy

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Free verse № 60324

(getting used to spending too much time with myself)

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

i got my gravel legs back fast i'm like a 3 ton truck- somewere in me is an unshaven triple divorcee chain smoker and somewhere else is a cold crate full of ice cream.

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[7] EAger to Offend 11-Aug-03/10:24 PM Reply
Maybe it's finally enough...
That first line kicks anus!
[8] http://mulberryfairy 12-Aug-03/9:53 AM Reply
I liked it.
[7] basit_i 13-Aug-03/2:53 PM Reply
Very ... now? present? here? not quite sure *what*, exactly, but it's there. In general, alive.
no "pretenses", at any rate.