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maternal-infant bonding (rejection)

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Sep 2003 · 9 comments

- midgets that is what i have given birth to little brutes with leaky diapers and deformed heads their mewlings pester me constantly they are now left to drown in mummies milk the drink of love.

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[8] richa 11-Sep-03/12:34 PM Reply

like this,
kind of rough, remorseless talking to the reader.
like punk/ like beat.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › richa 12-Sep-03/4:33 PM Reply

yeah, it still gives me the chills everytime i look at it... then i remember i wrote it, and i grin like the cold hearted bastard i am.

[8] LuckyJoe 11-Sep-03/5:38 PM Reply

Awww how cute your diaper is leaking. Interesting poem man... here's an 8

[9] http://mulberryfairy 12-Sep-03/10:59 AM Reply

Nice. I loved "their mewlings". Interesting coming from you- did some research, did you?

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › http://mulberryfairy 12-Sep-03/4:35 PM Reply

actually, no, i was just thinking about the subject and my imagination spilled this onto paper.

[9] http://mulberryfairy › SupremeDreamer 12-Sep-03/6:32 PM Reply

I thought you'd birthed some infants from your (pleasingly) tight ("straight") anus, hence the deformed heads.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › http://mulberryfairy 12-Sep-03/7:48 PM Reply

LMAO. you are indeed imaginative.

[10] Lifeboatman 14-Sep-03/9:25 PM Reply

[8] Jill Stockinger 2-Jan-21/6:22 PM Reply

mummie's milk...
found the poem funny, enjoyed it.