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Queen Of The Ring

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

I smell it in the air, (Slight scent of hair spray) I hear it in the wind, (Distant men bickering with lisps) Much that once was is now here again. Whisper of an evil in the west. Rings where made to govern each raise. Three rings given to the Europeans Kings of techno And great fine art indeed. Five to the North Americans immortal and fairest of all (yeah right). Nine rings given to the South Americans who desire power over all. But all of them deceived, for another ring was made. Deep in Beverlykills, the lord Thillygooosth made a ring and poured his cruelty, fashion sense, and will to dominate all of Mediaearth. On this ring reads “bring you to the purple light, then felch you”. He sent his velvet clan to take over mediaearth But some resisted, a last alliance north and South Americans joined forces. They went to Beverlykills to fight the Thillygoosth dark alliance. They fought well, victory was near. But out of nowhere Dark Lord Thillygoosth strikes Hsiwej King of Hollyvood. When all hope is lost Wej son of Hsiwej runs to him. Lord Thillygooosth lifts his naughty stick and… WAIT Wej picks up his father’s camera and takes a snap shot of Lord Thillygoosthes bad side. In dismay Lord Thillygoosth extinguishes into fine Chanel #5. Wej clasps the ring. Now having the chance to destroy the ring and never let evil become. But the hearts of men are easily curupted. To be continued… I smell it in the air, (Slight scent of hair spray) I hear it in the wind, (Distant men bickering with lisps) Much that once was is now here again. Whisper of an evil in the west. Rings where made to govern each raise. Three rings given to the Europeans Kings of techno And great fine art indeed. Five to the North Americans immortal and fairest of all (yeah right). Nine rings given to the South Americans who desire power over all. But all of them deceived, for another ring was made. Deep in Beverlykills, the lord Thillygooosth made a ring and poured his cruelty, fashion sense, and will to dominate all of Mediaearth. On this ring reads “bring you to the purple light, then felch you”. He sent his velvet clan to take over mediaearth But some resisted, a last alliance north and South Americans joined forces. They went to Beverlykills to fight the Thillygoosth dark alliance. They fought well, victory was near. But out of nowhere Dark Lord Thillygoosth strikes Hsiwej King of Hollyvood. When all hope is lost Wej son of Hsiwej runs to him. Lord Thillygooosth lifts his naughty stick and… WAIT Wej picks up his father’s camera and takes a snap shot of Lord Thillygoosthes bad side. In dismay Lord Thillygoosth extinguishes into fine Chanel #5. Wej clasps the ring. Now having the chance to destroy the ring and never let evil become. But the hearts of men are easily curupted. To be continued…

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[4] sliver 13-Sep-03/7:39 PM Reply
O.K. something is wrong here. I can smell it (distant smell of ether.) But still waiting for the continuation, only because I want to know what happened to the queer guy, you know sillygoose. I hope the spread his entrails across three continents, That would make this an interesting read.
[n/a] horus8 › sliver 13-Sep-03/8:13 PM Reply
the queer guy evaporates into chanel #5 perfume.
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[1] Jill Stockinger 22-Dec-20/5:25 PM Reply
Annoying you are using Hsiwej = Jewish backwards

Also, so many spelling errors get annoying to read