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Free verse № 64986

Angelic Fornication

by The_Third_Isis

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Sep 2003 · 8 comments

She attended Sacred Hearts of Jesus' Catholic school in Bogotá. Knee high socks, pleated skirt, with a white tight Polo shirt. All girls’ school was hell on earth. She prayed in every direction for an Angel to guard her and keep her safe From herself, and the others. Outside her window was Mt. Seratte. The highest peak on that side of the Andes. "100 hail Mary’s,” said father Del Vechio, when she said "cono" for the first time. In another country she had a partial immaculate conception. She was in love with the fallen. An angel absolutely perfect. I'd give him an eight forever. the first time it was sublime, deep, almost painful. Desire and the sweetest sweat. She said "cono" a 100 more times as he copulated. No hail Marys. Angel moans, as she digs into divine flesh. No remorse. Just a heart that bleeds forever more. No longer mine. No longer yours.

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8 comments

[9] suprembeaner 13-Sep-03/4:03 PM Reply
dig into deep flesh eah.
iNterEstING
[9] suprembeaner 13-Sep-03/4:13 PM Reply
some loves angel trumpet=;/>
emmkay...
3char1per
8.
[9] TheVoiceless 13-Sep-03/4:39 PM Reply
Very nice. It says a lot but drags or something at the end. Maybe take out the last two lines? Here's a 9 none the less.
[9] suprembeaner › TheVoiceless 13-Sep-03/5:14 PM Reply
do even know what "Angelic Fornication" means,
if you did then the poem would make more sense to you.
you should be called the brainless.
3char1per
just kidn
[10] sliver 13-Sep-03/7:30 PM Reply
Well, what can I say. Hmm...She sounds really tasty, what with the socks, the skirt, etc. That alone deserves a 10.
[n/a] The_Third_Isis 15-Sep-03/11:24 PM Reply
Bravo religius delirium at its best I for twoo minutos closed my eyes and salivated at the tought of such union,,,i need another mia culpa and ten lashes for my own desires, Ive slipped into a very aroused state dios mio...MACHETE
[8] dragonfly 9-Dec-03/3:22 PM Reply
I was wearing the same outfit during my visit to Buenaventura.F
[n/a] Jill Stockinger 21-Dec-20/6:22 PM Reply
This moved me. I felt the pain.