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Free verse № 67534

the meeting

by richa

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2003 · Edited 6 Oct 2003 · 8 comments

The bottleneck of a hollowed out birch stump; wind blows over a gentle key, meeting at E, somewhere in the arpeggios of a mind, the pursed lips of a girl piping on the pagoda steps of an embankment. Alone.

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8 comments

[n/a] Joe-joe 30-Sep-03/3:20 PM Reply
Rich, I trust it's me...but I gotta tell ya...ya lost me after the first line. Deep or far out...I'm not sure which one is applicable here.
[10] INTRANSIT 30-Sep-03/8:28 PM Reply
Something tells me this is just right. yes, yes. Somehow I get this and it works. Excellent.
[n/a] richa 6-Oct-03/10:38 AM Reply
trying to get a feeling of physical distance with the last line.
[10] INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/1:48 PM Reply
phooey!
[8] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6-Oct-03/4:28 PM Reply
Ponderous, yet somehow still very tactile. -8-
[10] Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Oct-03/4:40 PM Reply
Incredible.
[7] Caducus 9-Oct-03/8:50 AM Reply
De Ja vous but i like it
[n/a] ==Doylum › Caducus 9-Oct-03/9:25 AM Reply
Look Hywel just cause your you're yore ure a Plydd Cymru facist student nazi separatist with large bald headed handlebar moustached tendancies and a stupid welsh name doestn't mean that Cadacus should abandon his attempt at further European intergation. Admittedly its only franglaise with a dash of german at the moment but give him time would you!