Perfect

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Look at you. You are so perfect. You found your desires And wishes. You have it all now. You will be happy. You will be joyous. Going on with your perfect life With your perfect love. You will love her forever, I???m sad to admit it???s true, Because you two are perfect. Perfect passion and adoration. Where does that leave me? In the dark corner of hopelessness, I wish I could find someone perfect, But I cannot find him.

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[0] razorgrin 29-Jul-02/4:23 PM Reply

stay in your dark corner.forever.

[3] horus8 29-Jul-02/5:26 PM Reply

the sharks have come to smell your work. they have left nothing for me, but a raven crushed stain upon the road 18 mls. south of davenport, your beak is bent and pointing south east. follow. follow the 'hoof' its shape is right(write)o

[2] fevriere 18-Jan-04/8:52 AM Reply

It's lacking, poetically. It tells rather than showing. I like that you know what you're saying but at the same time I'd rather the words illustrated instead of just plonking down their meaning.