poemranker ::Stranger by mytenderrage

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Free verse № 5636

Stranger

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Who am I? I am my own stranger. I am not the one Who speaks Who feels Who wonders. I cannot hear myself When I scream. I cannot feel it When I am stabbed By your daggers. I do not feel the blood As it drips down From my violent wounds You have inflicted on me. I am numb. I do not care about anything. Nothingness is what I am. Nothing but a shadow A dark mirage That no one sees. Who am I? I am but a stranger No one knows me. Not even myself.

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[n/a] razorgrin 22-Jul-02/1:49 PM Reply
Gloom 'n' woe. I getcha. Your life is a dark closet of darkness.
"Ve ah nihilists.Ve beleef in nuthink"-the big lebowski.
[8] ARTIE 22-Jul-02/3:17 PM Reply
Let us go for a walk, past the cemetary of time. You'll awaken.
[8] horus8 22-Jul-02/3:25 PM Reply
nothing over something times -god over everything equals life. Math don't lie.