At First sight

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Sep 2003 · 4 comments

Dark shadow of aggressiveness With your manipulative scent I look into to you only finding regret Lust is wicked Lust is vile My body trembled in your grasp My mind forgot my chosen path Speak to me Meet with me Lets us invoke what we both are missing Noting complicated Nothing overly thought about Your lips made my body sing Never once thinking of what my heart should feel I donât love you I love your scent I donât need anything but your physical strength So speak to me But be silent when facing the world I have everything to lose

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4 comments

[1] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 18-Sep-03/9:15 AM Reply

Dull.

[0] DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/12:24 PM Reply

blah blah blah -- your ordinary off the wall bathroom stall scrawl.. *fart* 0

[n/a] deleted user 19-Sep-03/1:51 PM Reply

A Whitmanesque ode to estrangement and runny fluids.

[9] Furin 11-Jun-04/4:41 AM Reply

deep but standart