poemranker ::contradiction and contrast by Freethinker1602

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contradiction and contrast

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

Ever noticed when you Look at life and how Imperfect everything seems to be? Or think how incomplete it is? It can't all have fallen that far How did you get here Why can't you just move on and be done? Why can't you shut your eyes and Just stop hurting Why can't you laugh it off It's not all that bad Just forget it all Just move on Even when the days get longer And the pain sharper How long before you can't endure Just forget and move on Think it's even possible You've fallen this far There is no point You need to find something worth fighting for If you have one enemy to defeat Before your death maybe you can Just hold on a little longer Just a little longer Cuz everything matters

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[n/a] deleted user 18-Sep-03/1:44 PM Reply
If you watch enough TV, someday you shall appear on it!
[n/a] Freethinker1602 12-Oct-03/12:44 PM Reply
it's best not to talk to one's self while writing or soemthing like this comes up