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Leaving

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Sep 2003 · 8 comments

To you this may mean nothing, but to me: Everything. I'm left aching for your presence, your touch, everytime you leave- Me. Leave me. For somebody other (better) than me. I hope you are happy. Happy with her. Beacuse this time; this time I'm going to leave- You. Leave you. For somebody other (better) than you. And this time; this time I'll finally be happy. Without you.

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[8] sliver 24-Sep-03/10:37 PM Reply

Damn. Well, still some problems,(spelling/typo's) That,s why you read it before you submit. Iliked it better then the other, so 8.

[n/a] Pervy Elf › sliver 24-Sep-03/10:46 PM Reply

I see what you mean about the spelling...I never did very well in that area. But, what do you mean about 'Damn'? That's makes me kind of nervous...

[8] sliver › Pervy Elf 24-Sep-03/10:50 PM Reply

It's agood thing. You have alot to say, you just need to work on expression.

[n/a] Pervy Elf › sliver 24-Sep-03/10:56 PM Reply

Expression? How so?

[8] sliver › Pervy Elf 24-Sep-03/10:58 PM Reply

It just feels like you have alot more to say but you're holding it back. Let it go, kick ass.

[n/a] Pervy Elf › sliver 24-Sep-03/11:03 PM Reply

I don't think that I could post here if I held nothing back. It might, okay, it will get ugly. It's amazing how many expletives can be strung into one sentance. And directed at only one person, too. Hmm...^_~

[8] sliver › Pervy Elf 24-Sep-03/11:07 PM Reply

Fuckin' do it, Nentwined deales with alot of shit here. You're only 19, you can't top us.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Pervy Elf 25-Sep-03/12:18 PM Reply

Wow, you must have so much burning rage and pure beautiful energy if you couldn't post without holding something back. It's obvious that the only thing you're holding back is a silly temper tantrum about your parents/boyfriend/best friend "betraying" you, so while you aren't going to offend anyone by posting it here, you'll just upset yourself in the long run when nobody fucking likes it. Thanks!

Your friend,
doug