poemranker ::religion by ThePariahDog

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Free verse № 67269

religion

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

you are here alone again in your sweet insanity you're hiding yourself from the truth i want to know, do you call it liberty? the fields are filled with desires my voice is crying for freedom but it will fade away in vain i am the only person you run from with a blinded mind, you are singing a glorious and beautiful song the angels flutter in the distance all hallucinations, your perceptions are wrong i am here with you again in my bittersweet serenity hoping you will find your way out of that place your liberation is solitude, that is your identity

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Sep-03/8:43 AM Reply
Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!
[7] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 28-Sep-03/5:41 PM Reply
Jesus loves you.