poemranker ::Not M.A.Y. by Yatasuma

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Not M.A.Y.

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

We seemed so perfect, so meant to be You were the only need to see I was on the brink of madness Walking the earth and searching the sea But then I sat there watching as you pulled the knife It seemed like your only want was end my life Laying in the field you felt to him Third wheel with no spokes, all was strife This beautiful hell bathed by the moon I thought we’d stand, be together soon Your head rested lightly, cradling his Was your only thought my death at high noon? Stranded there, I had no choice but view Under the veil of night it was the grass, the moon and you two Like two stars shooting in line I had to let go, it was him and her, not me and you Just to be numb for life be not real I’d drink till I couldn’t feel The pain that’s been placed inside me Just so the wound would heal

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Oct-03/4:52 PM Reply
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