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My deepest thoughts

by poetandknowit

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Oct 2003 · 12 comments

drip drop drip plop plop drip oooooohhhhhh plop drip dripdrip drip plop ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh drip drip burp plop plop pluck bucket beneath bucket beneath drip drip free at last free at last......................

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12 comments

[n/a] god'swife 24-Oct-03/6:39 PM Reply
A post- post- post- Modern Luther King Jr.
[n/a] <~> 24-Oct-03/6:51 PM Reply
Behave yourself, Senor Burro!!!!!!!
[n/a] The_Third_Isis 25-Oct-03/1:15 AM Reply
Sounds like a table full of chubby cheeked Hawaiians jonesing for diet poi.
[n/a] Caducus 25-Oct-03/3:45 AM Reply
My thoughts are more like drop and splash.

I cracked up when i saw it because for a moment i thought it would be your life story.
[n/a] INTRANSIT 25-Oct-03/10:18 AM Reply
Ever had a stricture? Annoying they are. The cure is quite embarrasing. It gives you first hand experience of a menstrual cycle. minus the cramps.
[10] Don-Quixote 27-Oct-03/12:56 AM Reply
A masterpiece of poo poetry.

let it drip. 10.
[n/a] richa 21-Jan-04/1:31 PM Reply
Personally I think toilet poems are a valid art form.

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=2690
[n/a] Everyone › richa 21-Jan-04/1:54 PM Reply
Why don't you fuck off, with your generic, nasal European accent, and your tedious intrigued facial expression. You make sure to ask a question in every lecture in your thin whining voice, and smile. You make sure to nod whenever the professor says something you agree with. IT'S A FUCKING MATHEMATICS LECTURE. STOP NODDING YOUR HEAD YOU FUCKER.
[n/a] richa › Everyone 21-Jan-04/3:00 PM Reply
Excuse me Professor (Stephen Hawking) I think your computerised mouthbox is jammed stuck on arse.
[n/a] richa › Everyone 22-Jan-04/2:27 AM Reply
More psychology lectures actually.

If I can electo-cute monkeys then I can electo-cute (learned cripple) numpties.
[n/a] Christof 28-May-04/7:50 AM Reply
You posted this on my 30th birthday and very fitting it seems.
[n/a] Caducus 18-Oct-05/5:57 AM Reply
Looking back on my earlier stuff I agree it sucked ass.

The occasional line / stanza was okay but I cringe looking back at some of it.

My error was to post stuff in no apparent order, for instance I would post a poem i wrote at 20 and then the same day one I just wrote at 27 and its no wonder you thought 'what the fuck'?

I realized this error and birthed the swine - now I hope some of my later ones (the last 30 or so) are passable.

I was an arrogant cunt and apologize.