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Hurt

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Dec 2003 · 4 comments

I hurt you, I hurt myself worse. All I can think about is how much I hurt you. Don't make me feel this way, please forgive me. I will die for you. Take a knife to the chest and leave this fucked up world! I willing to die, if it'll make you happy. You hate me, but I can't hate you. All I can do is care for you and love you. Now and in my afterlife. AS long as you're happy, i'll die. Don't make me keep this guilt inside. Forgive me, it's all I cry.

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[n/a] nothingtoanyone 11-Dec-03/11:49 AM Reply

This is good Kristy!

[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Dec-03/2:42 PM Reply

I think you should slice open your chest and definitely let all of that guilt out. I mean if you keep it inside any longer it might kill you?

[5] dragonfly 11-Dec-03/3:47 PM Reply

0_o I'm lost. Ok, so you hurt someone and you feel guilty about it. BUT, the sight of them being happy makes you want to die?

[n/a] PunkyPanda 12-Dec-03/10:11 AM Reply

No No No... They hate me because I hurt them, and since the thought of my exsistance makes them sick to their stomaches...I'm willing to die to leave them happy knowing I'm no longer living. Basically, I care about them so much and I want them to be happy, I'll die for them.