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Rape

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Oct 2003 · 7 comments

She screemed and she struggled. But nobody heard her. She screemed and she struggled. But nobody heard her cry. She sceemed and she struggled. As her nails gathered dirt that she scraped from the foor. He did what he did ,and slipped away. leaving her in the park. in the dark. She will not screem. She will not struggle NO MORE!!!!!

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7 comments

[0] Bachus 27-Oct-03/7:44 PM Reply
I often rape the elderly.
[1] razorgrin › Bachus 28-Oct-03/5:08 AM Reply
Well, the toothlessness should be put to its best use.
[3] baphomet 30-Oct-03/1:43 PM Reply
I also like the ones with one tooth,
to give some friction.
[n/a] titan69 3-Jan-04/1:03 AM Reply
what sort of shity commenting is this????????
[0] horus8 3-Jan-04/1:30 AM Reply
Yeah, well... It parallels the writing.
[n/a] the codeine kid › horus8 2-Jun-04/1:47 PM Reply
parallels!!!
[n/a] titan69 › the codeine kid 2-Jun-04/3:01 PM Reply
yer this horus8 seems to think my stuff is? yer well i carnt understand that ether!