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Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 9 comments

i see that you see undersea but you will redo polygamy i see the shooting starfish of hope and i make a wish on the fleeting moment of ecstacy

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[n/a] deleted user 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

I just don't get you. This title is almost the pretentious brain-babble of my mother's used tampons....

[2] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

I so totally can not make sense of the title. :) Hmm. Yep, really can't make sense out of the poem either. kinda silly, but not silly enough, and not sure if it's even meant to be (silly).

[2] nentwined 19-Mar-02/12:32 PM Reply

this is just kinda lame. not sure what you were trying for, but I'd guess you were trying for lame. so with that, kudos, but...?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Aug-02/9:59 PM Reply

If this poem had a more "mature" title, like "Underwater Dreams of the Heart" it would be in the best section. It's vague, meaningless and sentimental enough.

[10] god'swife 22-Aug-02/11:12 PM Reply

I love you, will you marry me? I've been wading through so much unbelievable mundane trivia these peon's call "poetry" Bless you. 10/10

[n/a] skaskowski › god'swife 15-Sep-02/9:08 PM Reply

sure, i'll marry you. then we can have kids with such names as "iskser" and "mommy"

[n/a] Shin-Bojangles 22-Aug-02/11:30 PM Reply

For a while I thought, "Why bother going around and posting 'I don't get it' everywhere."... but It's worth a shot. What's going on here?

[n/a] skaskowski › Shin-Bojangles 15-Sep-02/9:10 PM Reply

duh! it's my emotions transposed into text. or rather, uh, not actually. it was all written on a note i coughed up one day. man, that note was mucousy.

[9] Bachus 29-May-03/9:51 AM Reply

So children that concludes our moment with skaskowski one of the most underappreciated poets on poemranker. Her poetry rocks, your sucks, rocks, sucks, rock, suck,roc, suc rocsu, and that will be the title of our new gym shoe 'rocsu' we will over throw nike. goodbye, next week we will feature the work of Settle 'the mang or the smythe?'.