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Memory

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Nov 2003 · 7 comments

How am I living with this memory Can't stop thinking of this memory It's everywhere even in Italy It might not be showing but I am thinking How am I living with this memory

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[0] SupremeDreamer 6-Nov-03/2:43 PM Reply

... im guessing that you had no inspiration for your writing today? Might look nice in your journal though.

blessed with 0.

[n/a] deleted user 6-Nov-03/2:55 PM Reply

A rigorous masterwork.

[10] sliver 6-Nov-03/4:30 PM Reply

Sometimes memories are the hardest part of living huh?
I refer you to my latest poem, On Visiting My Father.
I shall bestow a 10 on this li'l ditty to balance Dreamers unmerited 0

[7] deleted user 7-Nov-03/8:44 AM Reply

yea might want to rewrite this, where in VA are you from?

[10] ARTIE 7-Nov-03/4:16 PM Reply

You display far too much non-cumulative retentive agresssion here. In a way it's something that haunts us all, but, the cure comes with age.

[6] Shuushin 7-Nov-03/9:23 PM Reply

This could be remade stronger, probably by halving the size - it's a universal emotion, to be sure; I think its worth keeping.

[8] ShaNoN+960317485 8-Nov-03/2:24 AM Reply

I thought Italy is inclusive of everywhere, must be that i am wrong. If u ask a fool he wud nod n say this is great; since i am one myself i'd also nod n say u wanted 2 say more but u chose less. Just rem that anything that haunts is never short. Hence in the end i gota say its worth a 08max no more no less:o)