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Free verse № 7632

birds

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

the birds are laughing we should be wondering what we are doing wrong. all this time we thought them singing and ignored them as if our own. but they are above us in more ways than one and i think i can hear them laughing.

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[5] titan69 5-Aug-02/2:41 PM Reply
you are wright thay are laughing
[6] nentwined 7-Sep-02/11:47 PM Reply
cute. flow could use some work.