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Haiku № 77587

What I really needed

by Shardik

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Dec 2003 · 4 comments

Was for you to love something in me besides you. Once, upon a time.

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4 comments

[n/a] ==Doylum 12-Dec-03/9:13 AM Reply
have you got writters bloke?
you haven't written a poem for at least 2 minutes!!!

[n/a] ==Doylum 12-Dec-03/9:15 AM Reply
block even
[10] Caducus 12-Dec-03/1:58 PM Reply
I think i know what your're wrting of here.

Dad?

You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride.

I'm moved 10
[7] dragonfly 12-Dec-03/10:10 PM Reply
Nice and simple.