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Bloom Inside

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Jan 2004 · 4 comments

take it all inside and make it grow make it all inside and turn to snow build it all inside and start to produce construct it all inside and grow a spruce it starts to bloom and flower out growing fruit to consume in doubt not knowing if this experiment will fail if it does then once again I'm in Hell but if it works and blossoms inside me I shall take my time and all will see what I have becomen with this mutation and what I have started with integration I take my inner strength to the external and it shall take my mind to the extraordinary

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Jan-04/8:45 AM Reply

This reminds me of the four years I spent as bo'sun on the treasure scow "Forearms II". Eventually I was discharged for bursting into the officer's mess and stabbing the captain's lobster, dressing up in its boiled pink shell and cavorting and shrieking between the men's bunks until the mate captured me with the emergency jodhpurs. Ah, great days, great days.

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Jan-04/12:02 PM Reply

Impressive. Reminds me of the time me and Sammy no teeth robbed the 7 eleven in Dog town with styrofoam penises and reversed hospital gowns. Fortunately for us Sammy was nabbed and not myself, being a notorious fink, but illeterate, Sammy performed a vivid recreation of the event using the game charades, but not being able to pronounce very many constanents or spell, he merely succeeded in turning himself in for the death of Hoffa and Kennedy, sammy to this day is amazed by the event, especially at how he had "cosmically channeled" the authorities to Hoffa (he was found still living actually working in drag in bangcock, out on 'front' for a Canadien Dental group he owed a favour to) now Sammy works for the psychic hotline and is a blowjob specialist at Tahachipe fire camp in Pompei. Me? I'm still carrying jesus around during the day.

[5] zodiac 27-Jan-04/5:28 PM Reply

Good bleach-era Nirvana lyrics. I always thought that album was underrecognized.

[n/a] hatedestruction › zodiac 28-Jan-04/6:55 AM Reply

yes, Bleach was quite underestimated