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Free verse № 83647

Our visions

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jan 2004 · 3 comments

If you saw the real side of me Tell me what would you see Would it be the one you long to touch Or would you just think I'm nothing much If I saw past your mind Tell me what would I find Would I find a world full of joy Or would I just see a stupid little boy Could we just see past it all Because there was a time I can recall When we didn't have any of these feelings Because of you, my life has meaning

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3 comments

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Jan-04/6:57 PM Reply
No.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Jan-04/7:09 PM Reply
Your poems are about homosexual jews licking the chrome off of America.
[n/a] penguin fiend › <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Jan-04/5:53 PM Reply
No, I'm sorry, I wouldn't waste my time writing poems about you