poemranker ::3AM At Whitey's by DurtKL

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Free verse № 84500

3AM At Whitey's

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Feb 2004 · 5 comments

Location : White Castles on Reading Road. Reading, OH reading folk: white trash drunks enyce wearing wigger type drunks niggaz, drinkin 40 ounces out of a brown paper bag drunks highschoolers drove their tricked honda civics tinted black shades lugging chromed boots subwoofers slammed down No Limit beats while they hung out in the parking lot they think smoking black & milds are so cool 3am at Château Blanc When the bars are closed These stereotypes gather

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[6] zodiac 2-Feb-04/7:45 AM Reply
I guess they're your stereotypes too. You didn't do anything to make them more. By which I mean, it's good writing, and great images, but ultimately nothing.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 2-Feb-04/8:09 AM Reply
Whitey's ain't shit. Lefty's is where it's at. Password: KEN SENT ME.
[n/a] ho_hum › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Feb-04/2:16 PM Reply
Now that takes me back. Leisure Suit Larry I believe. Readers may like to take this as an indication that -=Dark_Angel=- spent his formative years trying to get a badly a drawn computer game character to cop off with another badly drawn computer game character. In this challenge he eventually succeeds with the unusual aphrodisiac of an apple. Stranger things happen at sea.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › ho_hum 5-Feb-04/2:39 PM Reply
Leisure Suit Larry is not a game -- it's a simulation.
[6] NanceXToo 5-Feb-04/1:10 PM Reply
I'm seconding what Zodiac said. :D