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Free verse № 87417

Broken bridge

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Feb 2004 · 4 comments

Hate to be the bearer of bad news but Your well ran dry the bridge broke down and your son died. "Were the ropes on the bridge tied?" she replied.

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[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 9-Feb-04/6:29 AM Reply
"Watch your mouth, you slag," I said, and caught her with a right-hook. She fell to the ground in an instant. I kicked her in the kidneys.

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[n/a] deleted user 9-Feb-04/1:13 PM Reply
Aptly named.
[n/a] That One 9-Feb-04/7:20 PM Reply
Thank you for your input.
[n/a] That One 10-Feb-04/5:23 PM Reply
is that a good or bad hmm?