poemranker ::I LOVE YOUR HATE AND RIDICULE by http://janglingjack

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Ode № 8793

I LOVE YOUR HATE AND RIDICULE

by http://janglingjack

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Aug 2002 · 6 comments

poets are assholes... this includes y'all... i don't say shit... though i feel small... my mommy just died... not a week thus past... so i log in and try to forget... but then the shotgun blast... of derision hits me... cuz you hate my words... you'mature poemranker poets'... are cyber fuckin nerds... my crime against humanity... was feeling my soul's loss... so i take my leave of you... cuz obviously yer the boss... (i am really at a loss for words...did i really offend your poetic sensibilities? i am truly sorry, people...) sadly, jj138

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6 comments

[6] Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/2:48 AM Reply
I think you succeed in creating a sniping mood and a sense of biting rhythm. 6.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Aug-02/4:10 AM Reply
Can you not see that -=Dark_Angel=-'s comment on your other poeme was the apex of irony?
[n/a] poetandknowit 14-Aug-02/7:42 AM Reply
Well, janglejack, you have succeeded in creating new uses for the ellipsoidal. You can take that away with you while you get some thicker skin.
[9] Frass 14-Aug-02/9:07 PM Reply
Firstly, I'm sorry for your loss. I give you a 9 for this poem, JJ. It leaps above the snarling, rank fog of cranky pretension and pointless crudity emitted by others on this site and overwhelms their derision with the immediacy of your strongly held feelings. Please stay on poemranker and submit more poetry.
[9] deleted user 27-Jan-04/7:08 PM Reply
your right most poets are assholes....i dont consider myself an ass hole....but i also dont honestly consider myself a poet....go figure?
i think your shit is true....
[n/a] god'swife › deleted user 27-Jan-04/8:20 PM Reply
Excuse me, but your assertion that most poets are assholes is simply that, an assertion. Completely unwarranted. Perhaps you mean to say most of the participants on this site are assholes. In which case it could be argued that most of the folks here are only excercising their freedoms and their anonymity, of which there is so little of in this beleaguered existence. What would you do/say if you knew you could get away with it? That sort of thing. What I mean to say is you really should spend a moment contemplating your own remarks before you flippantly and offhandedly soil the name of so universally revered and diverse a group as "The Poets".