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Free verse № 88390

Sweet Goodbye

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Feb 2004 · 4 comments

This is my sweet goodbye to you, for all the amazing things you do. For the crazy in love way I feel, and always knowing this love is real. This is my sweet goodbye to you, remembering your touch your kiss and your smile. How could I ever forget your laidback style? This is my sweet goodbye to you, miles away we'll be apart, but you'll always have a special place in my heart. This is my sweet goodbye to you, missing you in every way, because I knew I eventually have to face this day. Face the day you start your life anew, still loving you always, my lover, my friend, my boo.

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4 comments

[7] New Life Drug 11-Feb-04/6:08 PM Reply
not many people use the word anew..whatever works. This was ok until i got to "boo" then I just thought of You Got Served. hahaha. Team Boo.
[6] richa 12-Feb-04/8:24 AM Reply
Too many pop cliches

- to you... you do
- crazy in love -
- love is real -
- laidback style - so naff it would appear in a blue song.
[10] jasondingus 13-Feb-04/3:22 AM Reply
Love It!
[5] UrbaneSavvy 20-Feb-04/6:23 PM Reply
nice poem. hope that's what you were going for.