poemranker ::Hamptons by bondjedi

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Haiku № 8924

Hamptons

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Aug 2002 · Edited 18 Sep 2002 · 6 comments

Ms. Stewart, fine girl she gives financial advice then makes a big cake

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5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

6 comments

[8] horus8 14-Aug-02/7:21 PM Reply
god isn't that the truth...to see the further adventures of ms.stewart read my poem black liqourice & g-stringed orphans...lovely tale ..and this is a poignant haiku,good for you 8/10o
[7] Robert K Foster 17-Sep-02/7:09 AM Reply
5-7-7 -- interesting (but possibly unnecessary) variation...
[7] Christof › Robert K Foster 18-Sep-02/2:41 AM Reply
But there's only 5 in the last line?
[7] Christof 18-Sep-02/2:40 AM Reply
Sounds like my kind of girl
[7] dougsoderstrom 18-Sep-02/2:07 PM Reply
Very nice!
[4] nentwined 19-Apr-04/10:30 PM Reply
It took me a very, very long time to get this.

Though wasn't the deal she _accepted_ financial advice that she shouldn't have? As opposed to giving it?